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Exposition 1: backround.
Liam goes on the Cosmic and discovers his love for thrill rides. Later in the story, this love drives him directly torwards the largest "thrill ride" in the world, but its not the safest. -
Exposition 2: setting.
The setting is Waterloo, England. Liam, the main character, has a house next to a work in progress mall. Later in the story, the setting develops into China, then space. -
Exposition 3: characters.
Liam is the main character, along with Florida Kirby. Liam is constantly mistaken as an adult and is a GT student, one of the smartest in the school. Florida knows everything about celebrities and sickness. Then there are many more characters, such as Dr.Drax, the CEO of Drax World. Then other contestents that go on the rocket such as Max, whos obsessed with winning, Samson Two, a genius with an IQ of 200, and Hansen, a "wall street wizard". -
Why aren't I allowed on the bus? Rising action 1
At the beginning of the school year ther is a field trip. Liam isn't allowed on the school bus because the man working at the amusement park thinks he's an adult. -
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Cosmic BES #4 2012
Cosmic is about a 12 year old boy named Liam who is constantly mistaken as an adult due to his height and "stubble. Here, i will track the events that lead up to Liam chaperoning the first ever child- containing space shuttle. -
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COSMIC TIMELINE
Cosmic is about a 12 year old boy named Liam who is always mistaken as a 40 year old man due to his height and "stubble". Here, I will use a timeline to show the chronilogical order of which the main events in the story occur. -
I AM a teacher.... Aren't I? rising action 2
Liam is mistaken for a teacher and goes up in front of the school, but he intentionally messes up the assembly and tells all the kids to go home. -
I AM YOUR FATHER! rising action 3
Liam's classmate Florida Kirby pretends to be his daughter so that he can pass for a father. They go out every Saturday for candy, etc. They stop when Liam almost drives a high speed Porshe to their demise. -
IM GOING TO CHINA! YES! rising action 4
Liam gets an opporunity to be the best "dad" ever with the opportunity of a life time to go on the ultimate thrill ride (The Rocket) with his "daughter" Florida. He is then chosen because he was very patiently waiting on the phone. -
BRING. IT. ON. rising action 5
All the dads must compete to go on the rocket with the kids. However, Hansen's father, Eddie, jumps to a quick lead. -
AW! I LOST! WHAT? I WON! rising action 6
Eddie Exuandu wins the competition to go on the rocket. However, because of his scheme to make money off of the "astrokids" he is sued and sent to jail. Ultimately, Liam, with the second most votes, wins by default. -
THERES ONLY ENOUGH FOR ONE ADULT TAIKONAUT IN THIS TOWN!!! rising action 7
Liam is officially the rockets chaperone and gets to go to space. -
We're dead. CLIMAX
The flight buttons were pressed in the wrong order, sending the rocket and its' occupants spinning out of control. -
GIVE ME THE GREEN BUTTON! falling action
Max is obsessed with winning, so he decides to go to great lengths to press the mighty green button, which would kill them all by causing them to rocket off torwards the Sun. -
Is Hansen in the wall? Naaaaaaah. falling action 2
After order is restored everyone plays hide and seek in the rocket. In an unfortunate twist, no one is able to find Hansen. -
Oh my gosh. IM IN SPACE! falling action 3
Liam exits the rocket to look for Hansen, but forgets his safety harness and nearly gets lost in deep space forever. -
THERE YOU ARE HANSEN!!!! falling action 4
Liam finds Hansen in the wall of the ship but not until after his near- death experience. -
CHECK IT OUT! ITS THE MOON! resolution 1
They find the moon, orbit it twice, and finally spot Earth. -
Um.... Guys? We're in Siberia. resolution 2
After a crash landing they touch down in siberia. Then, Dr. Drax comes and rescues them from the barren waste lands. -
HOW COME SHE GETS TO BE PUBLICIZED? resolution 3
As it turns out, Liam's expedition is just a test run for Dr. Drax's daughter. She is sent to the moon and becomes famous while Liam's expedition is shrouded in secrecy. They would never be recognized publicly as the first kids in space.
