My Rotten Red-Headed Older Brother - Presley phillips

  • Exposition

    Exposition
    This story is about a girl named Patricia, her brother, Richard, and her Bubbe.
    The settings are in Union City, Michigan, the moving carnival, and their backyard.
    the conflict was when she got mad about her brother doing everything better than her. :(
  • Rising Action

    Patricia sees a falling star and spits into her 2 fingers and slaps her chest, and makes a wish.
    In the morning she goes to the carnival with her brother.
  • Climax

    She did a contest between her brother and herself, and finally beats her brother, by going around the merry-go-round more than Richard.
  • Falling Action

    Falling Action
    Patricia fell off the ride and her brother saved her. She actually beat him but it ended up all coming out right.
    :)
  • Resolution

    The ending reslolution was when they children went home and talked to Patricia after she was laying down, because she fell off the ride. They went outside and prayed about how they love each other and all that.