Drums, Girls, and Dangerous Pie

By swagmuffin01

  • Exposition

    Exposition
    What is happening:Steven is in reading class writing a topic about the most annoying thing in the world.His story was about how annoying his little brother Jeffery.The story takes place in current day.
    Whether:It's fall during this time.Not really affecting the book right now.

  • Setting

    Setting
    Description:Steven woke up before his whole family, so he chose to play the drums. Jeffery wakes up, and goes to Steven to make him some oatmeal. Steven starts making oatmeal, and Jeffery falls off a chair and is bleeding out of his nose.
    Wheather:Since it's fall it's making it more dramatic towards Jeffery.

  • Rising action

    Rising action
    Description:Steven is in reading again, and doing another topic.He has also realized his brother has cancer.
    Wheather: It was rainy so it tied with the mood Steven is having right now.

  • Suspense

    Suspense
    Description:Today was when Jeffery had to go to the hospital for his treatment.Steven is starting to keep to himself more.
    Weather:It's fall and more and more rainy days are showing up

  • Internal Conflict

    Internal Conflict
    Description:Steven is starting to become more insecure with is thoughts, and people are starting to wonder about him.Steven isn't taking the cancer thing not to well.
    Wheather: not much is given.

  • External Conflict

    External Conflict
    Description:Steven is struggling with his grades in all of his classes.He is also loses friendship because of his depression.

  • Climax

    Climax
    Description:Steven has to make a choice if he wants to stay and do his solo which he has been working on for a long time or go with his brother to the hospital and keep him comfortible.
    Wheather:It is dark out showing how fear is coming in.

  • Falling Action

    Falling Action
    Description: They learned that Jeffery is ok, and Steven is doing better in school now.Everybody is now suporting Steven now.
    Wheather:It's Spring

  • Denouement

    Denouement
    Jeffery is better, and his cancer is in remission. Steven is now getting A's in all his classes again.
    Wheather:It's all bright and sunny again

  • Theme

    Theme
    When a difficult hand is in task never give up.Even when it looks bad just pull through it.
    Weather:not given