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Exposition
The main charactor of the story is Patricia.The story takes place in a field in Michigan.Patricia has a rotton redheaded older brother named Richerd that can do everything better then her.Her grandmother Bubbe rtys to keep the peace between the two.They are both very compettetive with each other but this time Patricia wants to win. -
Rising Acion
One night Paticica and Bubbe where looking at the stars and bubbe made a wish, so did Particia.She wished to finally beat her older brother at something.Anything.The next day the rolling carnival came to town.Patricia got on the marry-go-round and richerd followed.Afted a while it turned into another contest of who could stay on the caresale. longest.Finally Richerd got off and Patricia won. -
Climax
The caresel contest took a long time but finally Richerd stepped off. This ment that Patricia had won.She was so happy but a little dizzy she steped off and passed out from her dizzyness. -
Falling Action
Everyone crowed around the bed that Patrica was laying in.She was asking quesstions about what happend and how she got there.Everyone explained. -
Resolution
Patrica was told that Richerd got attention of thier parents and carryed her all the way home while she was uncontious.Her relaationship with her rotton redheaded older brother just got alot less rotton.