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Exposition
This story is about a Patricia she is the main character.She lives in Michigan with her mom,Richard(brother),and Bubbe(Grandmother).The main conflict is her older brother does everything better than her always. -
Rising Action
Her brother does everything better than her.She decides to see who can eat more rubard,her brother hates rhubarb.But it turns he he dosn't like it he loves it.He ended up winning.That night she makes a wish to be better than her brother at something -
Climax
The next day there is a carnival she and her brother go on the mary-go-round they go around about 50 times then her brother gets off.She stays on after a while she starts getting dizzy.When her bubbe calls her to get off she starts walking off the platform but then she falls,and passes out -
Falling Action
When she wakes up shes in her bed.Her mother asks if she is ok.While she had fainted her brother had carried her all thw way home.He had gotten the doctor.She had gotten stiches.She had finally done something better than her brother. -
Resolution
That night the sleeped outside.Patricia told her Bubbe that wishes sometimes dont come true the way you want them to.Her Bubbe said that you have to be careful for what you wish for.That night the relationship she had woth her brother changed her brother smiled at her but in a nice way.
