My rotten red headed brother-Cynthia Betancourt

  • Exposition

    Exposition
    Main Characters:The sister Trisha, the brother Richard, and Bubby the grandma.
    Setting: Union Michigan
    Main Conflict:The brother is always bragging to the sister.The sister is tired of it, she wants to beat him at something... anything.
  • Rising action

    Rising action
    The rising action in this story is when she said that she can eat more rubar.Her brother said it was on.He won again she though she was going to eat the most because he said he didn't like rubar, it turned out he LOVED rubar.She was mad.It was night time and bubby and her were looking out the window and bubby saw a shotting star,bubby spit between her fingers and slaped her chest.She asked what was that for, bubby told her thats how to make a wish on a shoting star.That gave her an idea.
  • Climax

    Climax
    Trisha wished to beat her brother at somethng.......... anything.So the next day the circus came.Richard told her "I bet i can eat the most hot dogs." she said ok and he won, but he got on the mary go round and got off because he go dizzy.So then Trisha was still on and she finally beat her brother at something finally.She was so proud,but when she tryed to get off next thing she knew she was in her room with all her family there.
  • Falling action

    Falling action
    Trisha fell off the mary go round because she was super dizzy and she fell into a plethora of bottle caps.Richard was the one who took her home and ran to get a doctor for his little sister.He saw Trisha get stiches and everything.Trisha was really suprised, all Richard said was " What big brothers for?! :) ".
  • Resolution

    Resolution
    Richard and Trisha have a different relationship now.Trisha learned that wishes come true ,but in werid way, but worth it.Richard will always be older than her. :) this reminds me of me and my brother because we fight alot, but we will always love each other besause we are super goffy.We might say that we hate each other, but we love us, but we both love ME!!! :D